Eeee. That fish out of water line creeped me out of bit, and I’m not sure why.

’Twas a pleasure writing with you, my friend.

interesting how the room changes color, which seems to be a psychological thing.. and the black ooze, perhaps a hallucination..

Hahaha… Nice tags.

This sounds like a really disturbing nightmare. Good work.

Disturbing visuals, and these ‘watchers’ are pretty freaky. And yeah, the tags are hilarious. That sentence that ends ‘to no avail’ could have been a simple compound sentence (comma instead of elipses) or just have the ‘but’ taken out. Style point only though—just kibitzing.