Very spooky, unnerving dialog. Nice job putting some philosophical depth to it all. That first sentence is way too long though. It’s not a run-un, I don’t think. It just wound up with too many clauses.
Very spooky, unnerving dialog. Nice job putting some philosophical depth to it all.
That first sentence is way too long though. It’s not a run-un, I don’t think. It just wound up with too many clauses.
THX 0477