This is wonderful! It’s an excellent continuation to the story. And I love that you switched perspectives to the female character — and gave her a name. :)

Oh thank goodness! I saw how much fun you had with the Epic Story of SciFi Epicness and hoped you’d enjoy leapfrogging another story (since I enjoy it too).

Nice continuation and really starts putting things into context. I like that he doesn’t just go right for her, but takes a moment to try and collect himself. That felt very believable.

I’m dying to know more bout this Sanctuary! ;) A lovely new direction of the sequeled story, I hope you guys will continue this leapfrogging game!

I would love it if Jim continued the story…poke him for me. And thank you so much for your kind words, I enjoyed writing this piece. :)

You rang, m’lady? :-)

./happydance

nice continuation! loving the mystique of the woman and the Sanctuary. :)