Been here all my life.

Dude I don’t understand women either! (And I am one.)
Man, this is fantastic and a gem to read aloud. This is one to add to the recital list.
I love this style of poetry. it flows so well (though seemingly jarred in structure).
Bellissima, my friend. And I long to read your beautiful poetry again.
(Imagine me flourishing a flowered hat as I exit stage left)

I agree with Pandora, I’m a woman and don’t understand the things we may do. I also agree with the comment about flow. It flows so nicely, but jarring in structure. Good work!

It’s pretty simple— women like assholes. If you want to get laid so bad, buying them things and sucking up, and professing your deepest most thoughtful heart will get you crushed… take it from me… you’ve got to adapt… but when you find the right one it’s time for a nice guy relapse.

I want to say that I’m a nice guy at heart, but most women (whether they will admit this or not ( cuz even they hate how much they love it)) sometimes just want someone who’ll utterly dominate them in a mostly pain free, safe and secure, but incredibly aggressive way. You all know it’s true so don’t even try to refute that!… and that’s pretty much what guys want to do… on the surface anyway…so like Nike— Just do it!

You all probably think I’m the biggest jerk on the planet but dang it I’m not imparting truths over here, and I’m actually very sweet, so there :P

Wow. I was totally feeling you on being a nice guy until you mentioned money. Which I am severely lacking.

Great poem easily one of my favorites I’ve ever read on this site. I’ve never seen this type of poetry before.. The sharp parts that stick out add to it rather than subtract! I need to learn how to do that..