Another great submission.

Well that was brutal and disturbing. Now I have to go see what the challenge was about. Some great descriptions, especially the whole physical/mental chaos/brokenness metaphor.

Gutted pigs? Ha! Creative! Ending is great.

I enjoy the gutted pigs and the railing simile.
Great detail.

This is an intriguing piece, particularly when you consider how it changes depending on whether Frank is a good man and innocent victim, or bad man whose actions brought this on his family.

I swear that I will send you souls until Hell itself buckles. Give me a sign when redemption is at hand.

Dynamite. Just dynamite. Honestly, as much as I enjoyed this piece, I’d rather have the story of what comes next.

Damn. I submitted my story before reading yours, and there are parallels I hadn’t intended.

Good writing, though!

I think I’ll leave my story alone, it’s different enough to warrant keeping.