The first paragraph is a bit redundant, and I wish that this story wasn’t titled what it was, because I knew he died before I started reading. I think you should spend more time on this one, it seems a bit short and quick compared to first ones. Maybe make it a bit more clear that both swords struck. I thought Grey-Fang was the only one who had been “skewered” until you said that both warriors died.
Gradual Uprising {LoA}