Funny conversation and one I’m sure has been had many times by young women all over the country, if not the world. The pretzel is random, but I think it works as a transition back to regular life/discussion after the debate.
In stark contrast to your other entry, there’s no imagery or illusion here (other than, perhaps worryingly, the pretzel?) – this is matter-of-fact, frank, and funny for it…
My only spelling pick-up would be ‘brake’ towards the end, which should be ‘break’, but other than that, this was very – ahem – stimulating – MH :)
The title threw me off too. I wasn’t expecting this, but I love it. I also love the Cosmo reference…some girls hold onto their magazines like they are bibles or something. This was fun to read.