haha, marco polo would not be better than cold or hot for locating the right place. I was thinking from the tongue and the pressing too hard and the bra trouble that this was some sort of alien, but I was just as glad this was an awkward human. Guess I expect twists now!

Thanks very much. This is the story I’ve strugged most on so far on Ficly. It’s easy to write really, really bad porn, you just add 3 times as many adjectives and adverbs, but that doesn’t work in 1024 :’(

Might have been better if I’d split it into two and just done awful, awful porn and another story with two people playing smexy marco polo.