A good strong character voice here, and nice detail of the storage unit… Building up to a decent horror finale!
What really made the end great for me was the description of Todd’s neck as ‘fat’ – it made the image somehow more grotesque. A rotting hand squeezing a throat is bad, but a rotting hand squeezing a bulging, flabby throat… Truly repulsive, eh? MH :)
Akheloios 
Mostly Harmless