I really like this piece – it’s very visual, but it also acts like a kind of modern day morality tale – quit while you’re ahead, or don’t be too greedy… Something like that.

Either way, this works well as a one-shot, but the continued Vegas-hunting adventures of your narrator could also be interesting – good work! MH :)

Thanks – this certainly was part of an idea I had to write a series. Well, the groundwork about the “dimensional shifter” anyway. Glad to see somebody likes it :)