Nice piece, it’s really emotive, full of loss. But the last sentence is a non-sequitur. You’ve said that your character doesn’t give much thought to love, and they think they’re right.

The way you phrased it doesn’t actually mean anything in context. You’re saying they don’t give thought to love and it is correct to do this.

I think I know what you meant to say, but you didn’t actually say it. It’s a mixed metaphor. You don’t make it clear if they are right in believing that they shouldn’t give thought to love, or that you think they will never be loved.

I was a little confused on the last two sentences, but overall it was very good, full of emotion. I like how you stated that “this is life”. If this really happened, I hope it offers some kind of solace.

It seems you have three main ideas here: lost love, your dad, and the less sad idea that you have been loved and that its all okay now. Why don’t you edit this and add in some details?

Thank you, I will give this some editing when I get the time. :)