been too busy to log in and read anything on ficly for a few weeks, but I stumbled on this little gem. I’m a pushover for the horror/mystery/mystical genre. This had a nice “beginning of something” creepy feel to it.
My only critique would be to start the story using their names; it would give it bigger emotional impact on him missing her. Not much emotional buy-in when it’s just a “he” or a “she”. also, the “…” between the last to paragraphs seemed to draw me out of the story, rather than create any suspense.

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