Very nice story. I loved the multiple PoVs.

This is a great start! I’d change “fucks” to “assholes” , sounds better.
“These stupid fucks didn’t know who they were dealing with.”

I’d also change this it to "Sherry spun abruptly, gun in hand. Her purse fell to the ground as her eyes widened and her mouth fell open in terror. Two other men stood there, bewildered by the turn of events, uncertain what to do next…

Love it, can’t wait to see what happens!

Appreciate the feedback and comments!

@Icepixy- Your comments did make me re-edit the piece if not in the ways you suggested. At first it was because of the 1024 limit but after I finished I realized I liked the pacing and words that I’d used. I do appreciate the suggestions as I am always trying to better my writing.

@BoxofFun- The sequel to this one is actually in the “meat” of the challenge. Everyone has the same ending, you just get to decide on the personalities and reasons for their involvement.