If I was being too vague, the lady is getting raped.

It’s grws clear she’s being raped in the last two paragraphs, and the disquieting imagery in the first paragraph, the blood and bandages, the zombie flowers, make it an uncomfortable scene.

But the ‘two hearts’ beating, seemingly together, on the bed did make me think it was a romantic meeting when I started to read the first time. Maybe if you made them beat out of time, so they’re discordant? Or is it that it was a romantic meeting, and it turned to rape?

Wonderful suggestion! I will try and work it in. Thanks for the feedback.

You were’nt being too vague.
I think It was just vague enough for imagination to be used.
I also agree with Akheloios. It might make more sense for it to be out of sync, vs in.
Unless, of course, it was intended that way.

Wonderful piece non-the-less

Despite a horrifying subject matter, I think this piece is brilliant. I love how gritty it is, how dark and intense the atmosphere you build is.

Creating beauty out of horror. Fantastic work.