Sadly, I can’t speak Spanish. I hope someone who is bilingual finds your post and is able to give you some feedback. Also, I hope you can understand this comment.

thanks for stopping by, thx =)
gimme some time and i can re write it in english (or at least as far as i can)

(spoiler below)

the story tolds about a small demon who inhabits in a bus and enjoys playing tricks on the people