Very very shiny indeed. The slightly distorted reflection of normal habits like tea drinking, and the lovely use of unusual names make it creepy in a very subtle way. I’m enjoying this a lot.
Ooh, that took a turn for the dark. Very nicely set up and the turn of the lady from doddering and simple to potentially magical and menacing even was just great.
I couldn’t resist throwing on a sequel. If it’s not where you wanted it to go, you can always just write a different sequel to your own last bit. Hope you don’t mind.
Cheers, everyone. THX – no minding here! Always cool to see someone take something away from something you write. Pretty close to where I was going too!
Akheloios
ElshaHawk (LoA)
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Tim Brown