Nice use of description from the S.K’s PoV, using language that is their’s rather than generic. The diaglogue could use quoation marks though as I’m not sure the ‘Really!’ was vocalised, or was a thought in someone’s head.
Nice use of description from the S.K’s PoV, using language that is their’s rather than generic.
The diaglogue could use quoation marks though as I’m not sure the ‘Really!’ was vocalised, or was a thought in someone’s head.
Akheloios