The description of the hair floating in a purple foam of sorts made me puke in my mouth a little. Nice job!
Thank you! Always glad to know my stories can evoke a real life puking(well almost)!
The very fragmented structure gives a very visceral feel to this story, with the rush of images makes it very disconcerting. Bang, bang, bang, there’s no relief, horrific scene to horrific scene. The last sentence slows it right down, making it the worst image of all, having to go back in and record it all.
The very fragmented structure gives a very visceral feel to this story, with the rush of images makes it very disconcerting.
Bang, bang, bang, there’s no relief, horrific scene to horrific scene.
The last sentence slows it right down, making it the worst image of all, having to go back in and record it all.
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Kat Peters 
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