I like how it interest the reader right away…definitely captivates my attention. The only part I didn’t know if it was an error or not was the last sentence. Is it “The world rejoiced” instead of “They world rejoiced”? Very nice!
I guess quite a few of us from Ficly would survive. ;)
Reminded me of World War Z at first, when all the computer nerds had lost internet access and were forced to face the world they had been discussing online.
Sander Bol
Eve
Kat Peters
Akheloios
Jae