I like the poetry in the last paragraph. It doesn’t feel forced and adds to the emotion of the story.

I like the poetry in the last paragraph. It doesn’t feel forced and adds to the emotion of the story.

I love this sequel. It takes the story into an almost schizophrenic direction, as though the enemy is the person’s own reflected self. Even so, it remains open that the antagonist could be an individual entity.

Realistic, emotionally driven questions, and the poetic ending are all top notch.

Thank you guys sooo much!!! Thanks to Jae for inspiration. :)

I feel like this is a POV switch, this is the one being watched, which threw me off for a sec. It does have a schizo feel. I completely agree with Jae.

Nice sequel, sort of talking back to the one before, all anger and resentment. Really starts to paint it towards the voice being a conscience or some other part of self.