Brilliantly done. A simple, yet haunting and poignant dream story. And the way in which the dreamer is thrust right into the middle of the situation, yet doesn’t remember why she is where she is, and the way in which the projection of her dead husband/father/brother(?) talks to her is eerily calm and subtly disturbing. Overall, you’ve written a truly brilliant and unforgettable story. Nice work! =))
J. A. Keane