Very shiny, the cabin really came alive for me, and what a horrible place it was.

Wow, this is a story where I wish the character limit didn’t exist. Nicely done!

Great ‘in the moment’ storytelling. I like that it’s all about this poor guy’s experience then shifts at the end to hint at what is really going on. Nicely done.

Exciting! I like how you balanced characterization and action.