Wow, see now this is slight and mighty. Beautiful. I’m sitting here linguistically considering she’ll and shell. :D Nice!
Fuck me! Not literally. But this is stunning. I’ve never seen whoredom expressed so eloquently. Top form!
I love this. Simple, but expansive in meaning. Nice.
The lengthening line against the rise in the emotional tone is very powerful. With your use of semi-colons to give the piece a very fast pace, it’s perfect.
I really didn’t think of her as a prostitute, more of just a skank. But not a whore. Regardless of whatever goes on in my head, this is awe-inspiring. I read it a couple times, and loved it more and more each round.
I really didn’t think of her as a prostitute, more of just a skank. But not a whore.
Regardless of whatever goes on in my head, this is awe-inspiring. I read it a couple times, and loved it more and more each round.
Slightnmighty 
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