nice twist!

Ooh, it’s Pinnochio…wrought by lightning in our little dystopian world of conflict and impending doom. Nice turn and very dramatically told.

Thank you Thx

Epic twist! I like that this seems to be an amalgamation of fairy stories. I love the realisation that she has blood — it fried my circuits ;)

Your first line is killer! Cuz who hasn’t over cooked a ramen noodle before?
I’m lovign where you are going with this character!

Just a few nit pick typos:
“bounce off the gift”
“processors.#The”

Sorry, haven’t read the story yet, just the first part. overcooked ramen noodles? Classic. Please, continue…