seems fairly accurate. Madison is brave to do her own thing in the face of peer pressure.

It addresses the challenge well but it’s not exactly thrilling as a story, I’m afraid to say.
Also the triple question mark shouldn’t be in proper prose. It’s text speak.

It definately has potential but there could be a better twist.

I feel like this could a bit tongue-in-cheek in regards to the challenge! ;) Descriptively, deceptively well written for the blankness of emotion in the dialogue.

removed triple eroteme, this was just for my own amusement. Obviously not a serious piece of writing. Hope it mildly amused some of you, too.

Funny how you set us up to think she was really reading a good book, and then punched us in the face with the fact that she was reading Twilight. God I hate my generation.
I got a chuckle out of it. Nice job.