You could cut back to earth in the last paragraph to make it less repetitive, and fix the misspelling ‘climg’ to make this fantastic adventure perfect. 23 does seem a bit old to be climbing shelves, but desks seem reasonable. :)
Awesome depiction of imaginative play, and the twist at the end is hilarious. I can’t say I did this exactly, but I had my fair share of, “You’re a grown up now,” discussions during the first few years of marriage.
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