The forest and stones came alive for me, and the ambiguity of the geography was a great pointer for the emotional state. The double emphasis of quiet of the footsteps in the first sentence seemed a bit redundant though.
The forest and stones came alive for me, and the ambiguity of the geography was a great pointer for the emotional state.
The double emphasis of quiet of the footsteps in the first sentence seemed a bit redundant though.
I see what you mean, but note how it encompasses the sensory perspective: not just sound, but also how it feels.
Yep, you’re right, I missed the double meaning. I just read it as being synonyms for quiet.
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