Ah, that was sad and written so as to leave it open whether the guy is oblivious or trying to let her down easy. Great little bit of story with a lot of character and heartache.

You’ve got a “to” in the middle there that should be a “too”. Minor point.

ooh. hha. Always makes that mistake.XD

Fixing it would be a minor challenge, since I left almost no character unaccounted for.XD