Well then what is the village green for? Answer me that!

“we shall resume normal service” great line!

“inappropriate use of the village green” is precisely how we British describe such an act.

Wow excellent job creating vivid characters in so short a space! Really well done and I adored the end. You managed to create great characters while still allowing the reader to fill in their own details about. that’s what struck me about this story. I had fun thinking about what these two people were like.

Haha, nice last line! One thing: the first sentence was a little confusing for me. I don’t really know how you’d fix it, but I had to read it a couple times before it made sense. Otherwise, nicely written!

Wonderful.

Oh my, that was wonderful. I enjoyed your way of upending Victorian sensibilities.