Comments on Superiority Complex And Other Disorders by J. Rein B.

zxvasdf

Nice pun.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Foolhearted

Amazing pun. And it works great on both levels. And the ficly has a good line to it, it isn’t just a 1000 character setup for a punchline. I like it!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
THX 0477

Oh yes, that was quite the pun, and almost topical if not a year or two behind the news cycle. Nicely done, and really works as a valid reason for the animosity.
Minor nitpick, that first line should be, “There was a time…”
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Slightnmighty

Really nicely written, with the right amount of comedic punch and flow. I enjoyed the read!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
J. Rein B.

Thanks guys! I really really appreciate the comments.:D

@THX: ooh, typo. Sorry! Gonna fix it now.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Robert Quick

Congrats on being Featured with this story.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
J. Rein B.

Thanks.:D
I cannot express how excited I was when I noticed that.XD
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Abstract

So that’s where it came from? Those…those…those pigs!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
J. Rein B.

I remember when swine flu was the issue, my friend Sweet Summer Blizzard said “finally! flying pigs!”

Thanks for the comment.:D
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Jae

I admit, I’m tickled.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
J. Rein B.

thanks.:D
- Posted almost 9 years ago.