“…deep as a mermaid’s dwelling place” — I would have never thought to describe a color in THAT way. It’s a good line, surprisingly apt. The atmosphere of your ‘poem’ (hehe) was comforting to me for some reason I can’t quite put my finger on.
Cute little tale. I liked the ending, the bounce from large scale (moon looking for the person) to small scale (retaining the person for themself). I thought that worked really well.
Tad Winslow
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