Comments on Tomorrow's Weapons, Today by HSAR

Luke Nicolaou

So, this is why I couldn’t let you win. You write to an incredibly high standard with sci-fi and the whole explanation thing is your strong point.

You have done a wonderful job here, and I particularly liked the whole bit about ATP, because we’re looking at that in Med :p
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
HSAR

A little in-joke for those of us in the know about the Krebs cycle ;)

Hey, I never said I felt bad about it :P
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

This challenge baffles me. Somehow I vaguely understand this. Something about guns….? Haha.

I like how this really is in terms that a lamen like me could comprehend (with an exceeding amount of thought – this really is the kind of talk I would zone off through)
Plus the detail is fabulous. I love detail.The company’s catchphrase is pretty coroporate, I love the beleivability of this piece.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

This challenge baffles me. Somehow I vaguely understand this. Something about guns….? Haha.

I like how this really is in terms that a lamen like me could comprehend (with an exceeding amount of thought – this really is the kind of talk I would zone off through)
Plus the detail is fabulous. I love detail.The company’s catchphrase is pretty coroporate, I love the beleivability of this piece.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Abstract

Dude…I have no words for how awesome this is. It’s like you write copy for HSAR as a career.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
HSAR

It’s no coincidence my online alter ego is HSAR, :)

Thanks for the encouragement, guys!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Anonymuncule

This really reminds me of the weapons on the original Mass Effect game. They seemed very plausible, as do these, and really added to the atmosphere of the game. The sequel ruined this idea completely.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Akheloios

So very shiny. You do have a real talent for making ridiculously polysyllabic words easily understood through nothing but a couple of signifiers and context.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Tad Winslow

It’s technical. It definitely reminds me of a lecture.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Tina Murphy

I totally understood it and swear I’ve seen this on a science documentary.
Needs one quick fix though:
“And today we we are here to do just that.”
Take out the extra “we”. Right now it sounds like they need the bathroom. lol
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Jim Stitzel

I’d buy one of these if they could fit it into a nice, comfortable rifle. :)
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Jae

I was hoping this story would be as great as the hype led me to believe. You’re detail is killing me just as accurately as that gun would.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.