That was a really funny ending. I kind of thougth maybe the shaking wasn’t just in her head, but I’d assumed it was just really riotous lovemaking by her husband and his mistress. I didn’t get the point/reason for the poetic format instead of paragraphs. It seemed like there was a point, but I didn’t get it so it wound up distracting for me.

“Drunkenly” might be a better word choice, and you misspelled “unbutton.” Otherwise, that’s one heck of an ending!

so, did he cause the earthquake or was it a happy coincidence? :)

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