hmm..I’m kind of interested to see where you’re going with this, or where it came from, rather.

I salute you. You had me laughing the entire ride.

You scare me sometimes, Shank

5/5, if only for the fact that this would be awesome on the frontpage

I don’t like the line about friends being directly in contrast with the line about nobody knowing what they are.

I mean, I can understand that being true, and just a product of the narrator’s exaggeration or whatnot, but it reads wrong for me.

On the other hand, I love seahorses, and the story was terribly amusing, so

I fixed that line, Quetzi. I had intended it to have a different meaning, but the character limit bit me in the ass.

feels a bit tucker max

I don’t know who that is either

you and these names

that’s the guy who wrote I Hope They Serve Beer In Hell. Most of the stories involve him sleeping with girls in some way or another

The plethora of pictures makes me feel a little weird, like the narrator is some sort of man-slut. Maybe it’s just me. But I love the way it flows, and the ending has a good feel to it.

You did a good job with the narrator’s voice, establishing his vernacular.

oh wow! I love that the only reason he is doing girls is to draw on them. haha. nice idea and flow and voice!

strokes you