Comments on Lifted Off and Left Behind by J. Rein B.

Sir Bic

You should have titled it: STONERS
Live forever in the form of a stone head?
I think I’ll pass.

Good job.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
J. Rein B.

Thanks.:D

I actually had a difficult time giving this a title. Believe me, the first thing that came to my mind was Post-Stone Scarcity Society, which is not exactly inspiring or poetic.

I’m gonna keep the original title for the sake of fairness, i guess. I mean,this is entered in a challenge, so.

But I appreciate your comment and I like the suggestion!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Tina Murphy

Diabolical J! Love it. The repeating of “Thump” kept me wondering what was coming at the end. I like the idea and find it cool and interesting as to the survivors of immortality and what a bad choice it became for billions. CREATIVE!
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
J. Rein B.

Thanks for the comment ms. Tina.:D

That’s what I was hoping for.:D
- Posted almost 9 years ago.