“oh, the humanity!” – http://worldofseinfeld.blogspot.com/2007/08/oh-humanity-seinfeld-quote.html (watch the first video clip)

I absolutely love this! I laughed and cried at the same time. Then I felt real bad for laughing, and just sat back in disbelief over what this poor guy had to go through.

Great story!

Poor guy. It’s a run of rotten luck, but it remains believable cause it’s all reasonable real life stuff. Minor point, you could combine those last two little sentences for a slightly more humorous effect—totally just a style/opinion thing though.

I really hope this guy has better luck in Pensacola! Great job, and thanks for entering!