Well that doesn’t leave a whole lot of room for a sequel. You don’t see many animal zombies, so I liked this. The first paragraph was a bit rough, maybe just some sentence length issues. Great ending visual though.

Sentence fluency is a bit rough at some points, and it moves pretty quickly. Can’t decide if that’s a bad thing, but I don’t think so. I dig the zombie dog, but I just like zombie stories in general.

The story of a boy and his dog, how sweet.
-a la I AM LEGEND – zombie dog’s gonna kill you!!!

“Human sacrifice, dogs and cats living together… mass hysteria!” – Peter Vekman

On the train yesterday reading the Zombie Survival guide, and I’ve just finished Feed by Mira Grant, so I had Zombies in my brain, my delicious, gooey brain. Cue mad writing spree before arrival.

I couldn’t resist playing along, especially after I got the visual for your bit and my contribution in my head. Something just irresistable about zombie tales.

oh not another zombie tale! I just have to counter THX to balance the comments section! :)
normally that’s what I think, ugh, another one, but this ended uniquely. kudos!

I once wrote about a zombie turtle. Don’t know where the story got to though…

Great ficly. Even zombies need best friends.

Just based on the title and the first sentence, I already knew what the story would be. In fact, I think you could have just stopped there. Awesome, spooky idea.