Very nice narrative.

This is going to be a great series! I don’t really care for zombie stories but you, Paul, and the Doc are doing a good job making it interesting. []o)

Great to see the narrative continued. Awesome visual and one I don’t think I’ve seen before in zombie movies, the fallout from someone getting infected, starting to drive, then continuing in some haphazard fashion after turning. Really fun, cool idea. I like the continued focus on the knee as well, an easy thing to lose track of in the flow of a story.

If it were me, I would have added a line about how his leg had splintered at the shin, breaking at a weird angle so that it became jammed on the accelerator. Or else how could a zombie drive? I don’t think the undead can drive a stick…

I like the Day of the Dead idea that zombies can still perform habitual tasks, like shopping. I know that when I drive, I’m certainly not thinking about it, also, I do tend to groan a lot and think about eating the tasty, tasty brains of people who cut me off.