OK, I’m going to delete the other sequel I wrote and make it sequel this instead.

I like the POV work here, especially working in her responses to his thought processes.

I get a mental image of her emergence being like Beau Garrett’s reveal in TRON: Legacy, except that I keep thinking that this girl is in a red dress (I think it was due to the description of her voice as “sultry” and the movie-theater setting).

Wicked good fun. Cool to see you two doing a coop story. Thanks for the ‘thinkspeak’ reference to get me up to speed. Very fun, and the female character is intriguing.