Cor blimey, guvnor! That last monologue by the Girl felt like a gut punch just reading it. (Imagine how the Guy feels…) One little niggle I want to make sure you correct: “Temporally” should be “temporarily”. That’ s all. Excellent work, other than that. I shall sequelise it myself soon…once I can figure out how to follow this. (I need to think like The Doctor…)
J. A. Keane