Very descriptive and a great piece of writing overall. As an introduction to something more, this really nails it!

Dandelion is a boy?
Twincest makes me go all gooey. I think this is awesome and I only wish you hadn’t published this before I’d sketched out my whole twincest thing!
Beautiful though. Very good descriptions.

Hmm, yeah Dandy’s a man, and I thought I’d used enough masculine pronouns to make it obvious. I guess I didn’t. :\

No! It’s mostly because I read the profile first and just assumed and it’s hard to break a first impression, plus Dandelion is a somewhat feminine name, but then again, there aren’t many masculine flower names, are there?

Very good. A nice build up to the foreshadow at the end. Off to read the sequel. :)

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How did that feature happen?

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