Comments on Batman Does His Part by Jordyn

animal companion

‘What?’
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Proctagon

The tags are the best tags in the world
- Posted over 10 years ago.
lostsalient

Stated is good, but we all know it would be better if Batman sang his line.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
The Fantastic Mister Fish

THAT
WAS HOT
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Olivaw

The ending gets me every time.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mayra

Does the bat-penis have wings?
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Jordyn

No, it doesn’t. But the bat-condom is like a little cape & cowl s0rt of thing.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Shorty

Jordyn you are the living end.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
these are your nuts, sir

i ejaculated (i didn’t ejaculate, as it would’ve required high frequency wave emitting bat-gloves)
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Joseph

A+ batgasms.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Glunders

Yes, Jordyn, yes, yes
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
jesteram

To your credit, the very last line made me chuckle. Otherwise, this feels a bit less like a story and more like a joke. The first lines are so sparse and clinical—I’d expect WHAM! PLOWIE! language from a Bat-satire.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 2 out of 5
Jermaine Champagne

Only Adam West Batman does the sound effects, otherwise clinical is the name of the game
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Skull Man

the last line sealed it for me

good work, bat-jordyn
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Moonshine

why don’t I understand the last line?!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
John Perkins

At least Batman is a responsible sexual deviant. Unlike that dirty Penguin.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Stovohobo

I’m going to repeat everyone and say the last line was great. Now will someone do a McDonald’s one? Plenty of prefixable words there…
- Posted over 10 years ago.
THX 0477

Pretty funny. Does it have a mature tag? Cause it could use one, honestly. I hate to be a prude and all, but we’ve got a lot of youngsters on the site.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Stovohobo

@THX It is tagged mature, it just shows up for anyone to read on the main page. The problem has been stated in the help forums. =P
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Jape Prophets

Yeah, I could have done without the beginning, but his quote was just awesome! And like everyone else, I died reading the last line.

Great work.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
John Perkins

@Stovo, I don’t think it was originally tagged mature when THX commented. I remember looking when he said that, and it wasn’t tagged mature.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
these are your nuts, sir

the question is whether or not the sex happened out of bat-marriage
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Jordyn

I tagged it mature when I made it. If the tag was somehow I removed, I have no idea how.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
ALRO613 (LoA)

This actually had me laughing out loud!
I agree with Skulls — last line was the sealer!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
DarkPrimus

Jordyn I think perhaps you have stolen the Bat-comedy from Batman’s bat-utility belt.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Next Dyvim Tvar

I don’t think there are words to express how amazing that was.
Bravo.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Jessica Cahill

That last line was pretty frikken funny…even if the beginning was a bit slow to get to the punch line.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Ranx

Great!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Ranx

Great!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Andy G {L.O.E.M.A.T.T.L.O.A.}

brilliant!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Megan Kennedy

The last line was absolutely the best part.
- Posted over 8 years ago.