Welcome to ficly! I have a few pointers for you, if you welcome some advice..
Adolf’s description needs broken up a bit. When you say German Shepherd, I get an image in my head. if you were to say “black German Shepherd with patches of silvery brown fur and a spiky cuff due to his half wolf lineage” then I get a better picture than naming all of his body parts in a long string.
The italics on ficly are accomplished simply with underscore dash marks. take out the words ‘italic’ and slashes on either side. :)
oocampy?? Accompany?
finally, the policewoman smiles when she’s unhappy? I guess it’s possible, but I thought I’d point it out for you to consider.
One thing about ficly, these work best as pieces that end on their own, like chapters, instead of just parts of a story. It takes a lot of practice to get this down. It’s even harder if you’ve already written the piece and are trying to share it here. Just something to consider.

SO, I expect you will sequel this with the mystery as to why the policewoman is unhappy and what the weather has to do with it. :)

Or perhaps, you wish us to sequel.

Welcome to Ficly Rue! I loved your story so much I HAD to write a sequel:

http://ficly.com/stories/26347

I think you did a great job. It seem’s you got lost in separating Adolpho’s reality from Delgado’s and your’s too. It’s difficult to find/create a voice for animals, keep working in it.

My only suggestion would be to find one voice and stick with it. I tried to follow your example in the sequel writing the story mostly through Adolph’s eyes.

If this is a genre of writing your attracted to, I suggest reading The Art of Racing in the Rain by Garth Stein.

PLEASE KEEP WRITING!