Very emotional, sad, a little bitter. I like the rhyme scheme and your use of separation throughout. Should “Might have happened?” be on it’s own line? Abby x
Very emotional, sad, a little bitter. I like the rhyme scheme and your use of separation throughout.
Should “Might have happened?” be on it’s own line? Abby x
the emotion in this seems very realistic and believable. good job
Oops. two of the lines didn’t jump down a paragraph. Dx Thanks again.
Oops. two of the lines didn’t jump down a paragraph. Dx
Thanks again.
Abby (LoA) 
musicgirl musicgirl 
Brebelles {LoA} Abby (LoA) musicgirl musicgirl Brebelles {LoA}