Comments on What Awaits Us All by Over the Precipice of the Unknown; Into the Frontier of Uncertainty

THX 0477

Seems like a cool scene, and the whole idea has a lot of potential. You’ve got one slip into present tense in the middle that was distracting. I like the ominous last line though.
- Posted about 8 years ago.
Over the Precipice of the Unknown; Into the Frontier of Uncertainty

Thanks, i think i spotted and fixed it!
- Posted about 8 years ago.