Twisted and bizarre. Felt a little off-balance of first, but you got into more of a rhythm by the second half.
nice job telling it from the other POV. I love how ficly is a great place to practice writing through all the character’s eyes.
What I’m wondering is, why do all the titles have to do with food? I mean, really Analeigh? XD
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