Aw…your sequel honours me greatly. Good job on sticking with the format. I don’t know why I wrote it that way originally – the rhyme scheme seems very odd now that I read back over it. The last stanza is definately my favourite although your writing is beautiful throughout.

There’s interesting, conflicting emotions in this. I couldn’t quite tell whether it’s meant to be happy or sad. Either way, this is definately a poem for you to be proud of.
Abby x

You are most kind.
I found the format quite satisfying. By leaving the third line un-rhymed, it creates a tension that is then resolved in the final line of the quatrain.