Hmm what an interesting idea. I always thought that the concept with the tree was ‘does it make any noise’ instead of does it actually fall, as the subject is aural rather than visual. Anyhow…
I love your structuring. It’s so intriguing and the little verses of semi-repetition were great to read. Memories are very important. Which is why people with dementia feel as though their world is falling apart.
But I think that the basis of memory is in the future and our hope should be in the present which is, after all, what we live in. Time, death, long-lost friends and summer romances disappear as long as you have even the tiniest bit of hope for the future.
Great idea equally well written. Thanks for the puzzle. Abby x
Abby (LoA)