Beautiful. O.K. why didn’t you write this as a sequel to your http://ficly.com/stories/27033? That piece stuck in the back of my mind for these two months, I feel like I picked up right where I left off, with just a little tweeking. ( rethink, “headlight was shining so bring in our eyes”. brightly, too bright?)
Beautiful. O.K. why didn’t you write this as a sequel to your
http://ficly.com/stories/27033?
That piece stuck in the back of my mind for these two months, I feel like I picked up right where I left off, with just a little tweeking.
( rethink, “headlight was shining so bring in our eyes”. brightly, too bright?)
Thanks! Haha, actually that was a period piece for the Siege of Bastogne in WWII. Though, I can see how this could work as a sequel.
Thanks!
Haha, actually that was a period piece for the Siege of Bastogne in WWII. Though, I can see how this could work as a sequel.
And, my inspiration. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JEyxUoNmtnA
And, my inspiration.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JEyxUoNmtnA
I enjoyed reading this. Fantastic piece, and I also liked the song too. Great job!