What a weird ending. The fact he feels obligated to kill her to make her feel completely his. I did look at your tags and it kind of gave away the ending but nonetheless, good.
Well, by jove! I guess it’s a good thing that The Dude in the champagne supernova in the sky threw Adam and Eve out of the Garden if Adam was gonna wind up going all homocidially psychotically necrophilic and whatnot… Very nice story, Jellybean! =D
Laughing out loud at the comments right now…which has kind of ruined the creepiness of the tale. Thanks guys! Nice repetition of the ownership and it remains interesting even though it’s straight narrative. Very twisted. But great all the same. Abby x
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